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雅思写作的改写技巧你会写了吗

上海朗阁培训中心Amy时间:2017-09-19 11:05


摘要:雅思写作想要写好的话,改写的技巧也是要学会的,这样能够让你的思路和一些好的文章结合在一起,看看今日上海朗阁培训中心教我们该怎么改写首段。
  雅思写作想要写好的话,改写的技巧也是要学会的,这样能够让你的思路和一些好的文章结合在一起,看看今日上海朗阁培训中心教我们该怎么改写首段。
 
  雅思写作改写演示
 
  In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
 
  Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
 
  高分首段:
 
  It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.
 
  同义替换学习:
 
  the use of video cameras in public places = video surveillance 视频监督
 
  restrict our individual freedom= an invasion of privacy 侵略隐私(= invade one’s privacy)


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